WOW amazing, I totally love it...Can't believe how much your poems reminds me of the feelings I have inside!!! Keep writing, you have talent!!!

Unlike the others, I think the last lines were better than the first. But maybe you should get some feelings into the poem like how does she feel about it? I mean that would make it more emotional and not just words on paper. But anyway, you still did a good job. The last lines were great because they're so simple. Keep on writing, take care.
Satuxxa