Whats wrong?

The best poems are the ones that just flow out of ur head....and that was a great poem...if u would of cryed as they walked away they would come back and asked wut wrong...trust mee...but hope things get better for u...keep writting poems is the best way to get things out and get a point across

"When you ask me what's wrong
I reply "Nothing I'm fine"
I can really relate to that part of the poem! Have said that many times and I just wanted to scream I am not fine! I really hope things will gewt better for u! I have been lucky and things are now going well! It takes time but hold on good things will come ur way! Another sad poem that showed true feelings I always like that! Take Care! Brooke

It was alright. I think everyone has felt this way. Trying to stay strong and put on a face, acting as though nothing is wrong. Keep it up.

its from your heart and has a flow though it isn't like a normal poem structure.
i still enjoyed it.
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I relate to your pain....and this is a vertý deep poem, straight from your heart!!! love it!!!