Good job! Love the words, maybe a more balanced rhythm would do it better.
But overall, great!

hina

wow! amazing write...i love it and it does make me think. lol, now when i go home i'm gunna look in the mirror and ask that question...wonder what my answer will be. excellent poem!! and of course this deserves a 5 out of 5.

whoah, i really liked this one, really has me thinking/wondering.
Love you girl.
xxSamxx]] 5/5 as always