That is so sweet!! They can NEVER see what's really going on...Nice write!!! 5/5

Let's get my ignorance out of the way first. In the very last line, it seems like there's just too many words. As I said, it's probably just me, but I figured i'd let you know.

Now for the good stuff. Once again, you've pulled off a wonderful poem that, I would assume, nearly everyone can relate to. I commend you.