Temptations

by Ann Stareyes   Mar 30, 2005


As our lives entwined,
And friends we became,
Our desire building,
And you were driving me insane.

Then you called me,
And we met at the park,
Hand in hand we strolled,
Time passing and soon it became dark.

We looked up to the stars,
To let our wishes be known,
Our passion exploded,
Then you took me in your arms.

You looked into my eyes,
And I saw that look,
You lit the candle,
And that's all it took.

We found a beautiful spot,
Right beside the lake,
We put our blanket down,
Knowing what was about to take place.

We kissed and held each other,
For the longest time,
Then we made passionate love,
That filled our hearts with chimes.

The moment was perfect,
You took my breath away,
The love I felt,
I pray it will always stay.

I wish I could lie in your arms for-ever,
And smell your manly scent,
This night of passionate love,
To me you'll never know how much it meant.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    excellent poem,ann. you're a great writer dear. keep writing!
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Another great poem, you have such a gift...Aren't we all the lucky ones. Very thought provoking piece with so much visionary passion.

    Kisses
    Hayley

  • 19 years ago

    by Jeff

    Fantastic love story Ann..that must have been a sweet evening.I gave you 5.Thanks for commenting on my poems.Jeff

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    such a a sweet love story! Perfect! 5/5 :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    "you looked into my eyes, and I saw that look. You lit the candle, and thats all it took" ......AWWWWWWW! Ann, its just gorgeous! i love ur work! =)

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    (¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> God Bless
    The Heart That Touches Yours,
    Heather Michelle Craig
    <3--Shauns Forever--<3