by BleedingAngel Mar 30, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
He left her for another |
by UM
This poem wasn't that bad, you just need to proofread it and fix spelling and grammatical errors. Maybe organize it into stanzas. I liked this poem alot. |
by Mel
Hey, you......I like your style and honesty. Poetry is something good to come out of pain, I guess. Check my few poems out and feel free to comment. |
i know you said you think it's bad but i really liked it, well done |
by katie!
its very good... sorry Ive been away for a while so Ive only just got the chance to catch up on everyone :D well done |
by Alex
I really enjoyed reading this. well done even if it was written awhile ago it is still good. |