by ShadowedPhoenix Mar 30, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She picked up the broken glass, |
Wow, yey, finally, I have read a poem about exactly that! I always wanted to, dont know why.. |
by pseudo
Wow.. this is one of the best i've read so far! its such an amazing poem! it starts off with such emotion and powerful words and stays strong all thru and right to the end.. you had me hanging on every word! this is a sad poem but its inspirational because of the way it ended .. it such a great a poem about courage and abuse.. i loved it!!! amazing write keep it up =) |
Wow... awesome poem! definetly 5/5!! |
it was a really great poem.... it was strong, i saw any man who harms a woman should b in jail..... the first time he put his hand on me tho, it would b the last coz i wouldnt b there anymore...he'd b lonely mr.lonely he'd have nobody to call his own! |
by dragonfly
Wow that is very inspirational, i'm glad you free of that jerk now, and i'm sure in the long run it mad you stronger, i'm proud of you. Your poem was very well written. |