Death, My Savior

by paulina.♥   Mar 30, 2005


My dear savior has no skin.
He commits no sin.
He is made of bone.
My dear savior walks alone.

My dear savior is no fake.
Your life he’ll take.
Compassion he does lack.
My dear savior’s heart is black.

My dear savior loves me so.
I will always let him know.
I love my savior, can’t you see?
My dear savior, rescue me!

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  • 19 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    excellent! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wow beautiful, You have alot of talent, keep writing be strong and if you need to talk I'm here!

  • 19 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    Heh. Thank you. That is so kind. I think this is the most unique comment I have ever received. I love you, too. Hehe. :)

  • 19 years ago

    by iwanttobalone

    ya know what?? all ur poems kick so much fu.c.ki.ng a.s.s you have no idea.

    yeah ur so im my favs.. i read your nifty little profile.. jesus christ that is exactrly me. the simple plan/gc.. ur bands... your stand in society.. holy fu.ck i love you!

  • 19 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    I could always use a friend. Thank you.