Very well done. write on~ btw, thanks for your comment (and votes if any)
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Strong message, well written, although there is sometimes a happy ending :) But yeh I can still relate to it, keep it up xxx

nicely written Amanda, but remember one thing, not all knights in shining armor, end up being cads in a coat of rust, some men stay true to their honor and some don't but the most do,I know how it must hurt to have the one you expected so much from, gives so little in return for your all, men go thru much the same thing with their princess brides too sometimes, and they have to go on and learn to love again, keep writing you sure have a talent. thanks for your comments on my poems. harry

LUV it.keep writin.check out mine if you can.
5/5
Tes

I understand that totally. I've felt the same way and that poem was touching. Keep on writing, take care, you have talent! =) btw, thanks so much for your comment!
Satuxxa

Is is too sad....I know everyone goes through this at one time or another. I am in fact in the same feeling right now, but I know I will find someone who will treat me like I deserve....and you will too. Keep your chin up.

Take Care,

Jesse

Amanda,
I had read this before and took time to reread it before commenting, Quite a piece of work and very moving. So much more I want to tell ya but if you ever go into this chat room please let me know so I can say hi. Thanks for being a terrific poet!!!

Adding you to my favorites after reading that one! 5/5

I've felt this before, as many have! You captured the emotions brilliantly! It flowed so easy considering the contradicting stanza's....well done! Definitely 5/5~Holly

Another captivating poem
i love the choice in words and the way you capture the feeling and the soft mood inside the hatred again 5/5