wow, i dont care what other people think but i think its great., good job you had me hooked. i wish i had more time to read some more of yours but im out of time. keep writing and i will read when i get a chance.

Wow, once again awesome. I def prefer longer poems so keep it up. hope everything is going okay.

She's tried to get away
From this awful place
But every attempt has failed
That's why smiles never reach her face

Awww ..such a sad poem! How sad to think of a young girl that never smiles! I hope that one day she will be able to.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid