Never will forget

by *Guerita*   Mar 31, 2005


As I sit here in the rain
The thought of you causes the pain
You where the only one who I considered to be near
But all you did was leave behind a huge fear
Now I am scared to be in the dark
Because you have left behind such a big mark
You where my all
The only one I could call
How could I not realize you where hurting me
You should have just let me be
It all seamed to be going so fine
When we where at the border of the line
Know I sit here now knowing where I am going
The time doesn’t stop it just keeps growing
My heart beats oh so fast
Just thinking about our past
I will never forget you no matter what
Nor that smile you had when we took our last walk

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    "Know I sit here now knowing where I am going"....i'm a little confused on what you're trying to do here...and i'm a little confused on the end part...where you say "or how you wore that hat" what significant part of this poem deals with a hat???

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    very sweet poem, straight from your heart!!! It's never easy loosing some one you love....Hope that you are ok??? Thanks for commenting on my poems, it means alot to me....I'm from Denmark, that's the reason for my spelling mistakes =0)

  • 19 years ago

    by *Guerita*

    haha it all good now i just know that i have to work harder at writing poetry thanx

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebecca

    This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over him just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    aw sweet poem, you might want to check the last line
    Nor that smile you had when wore that hat
    Nor that smile you had when [you] wore that hat their iS an edit button in [your poems] if you would like to change it