aw sweet poem, you might want to check the last line
Nor that smile you had when wore that hat
Nor that smile you had when [you] wore that hat their iS an edit button in [your poems] if you would like to change it

This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over him just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem

haha it all good now i just know that i have to work harder at writing poetry thanx

very sweet poem, straight from your heart!!! It's never easy loosing some one you love....Hope that you are ok??? Thanks for commenting on my poems, it means alot to me....I'm from Denmark, that's the reason for my spelling mistakes =0)

"Know I sit here now knowing where I am going"....i'm a little confused on what you're trying to do here...and i'm a little confused on the end part...where you say "or how you wore that hat" what significant part of this poem deals with a hat???