Last Words...

by David   Mar 31, 2005


Red Rivers of lust and pain,
Heart bleeds of inspeakable shame,
I thought i was perfect in your heart,
But all i was was a friend from start,
You told me you loved me with all you were,
But i couldnt see eyes were a blur,
The tears roll down my eyes,
After your finish with all your lies,
Can't wait anymore for you to change,
My hearts open but yet its strange,
The life you live is the life you chose,
The life i live is the life i Lose,
Feelings mean nothing to you,
I don't even know what to do,
So Now I slip thy wrist,
Not even to be missed,
Therefore pain to be gone,
So heres my heart up to pawn.

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  • 19 years ago

    by chyenne

    wow! that was a widked peom i loved it i envy how u wright....

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥Munchkin♥

    I honestly think you're amazing. I know you don't know me but I was wondering if you or Jessica could give me advice about my guy. Unlike you he's different. Like you he chased and in the beginning would do anything for me... I fell for him deep... and it seems like afte the first few months he got tired of putting in effort and gradually went down to no effort really. He never phones, barely texts, doesn't go online, and at school he use to see me at lunch and break then only at lunch then only at break then never cept across the room in lessons. Now we its summer holidays and he see's me like once a week and doesn't contact me between unless I text him to ask him round. He's going to a diff school next term and I'm so scared. I just don't know why he chased me so much in the start and was like you in the start then suddenly puts no effort in. He says he's still in love with me and I've said to him if he wants out then to tell me now and save me from this hurt... and he says he's seriously still in love with me and always will be but it doesn't feel like it anymore. I don't know what to do. Please help me if you can. love always xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Arie

    very nice, thanx for commenting on my poem, it mean a lot....5/5. Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by J

    that's amazing. thanks for the comment. keep up the amazing work.

    x3 x3 Katie

  • 19 years ago

    by mindy

    it pritty good so im puttin a 5 there so ya bye byes