From Chaos Good Will Spring

Oh yes... you may use this poem as your own if you wish to. I will hold nothing against you. I give you permission to use it and you have the copyright of this poem.

Here's your poem as I would have written it.

When the world is failing to flourish
Ask yourself what you would do?
While constant thoughts leak to your mind
Would the world improve without you?

Or is it that you are just thinking
With all that's around you gone wrong
That the problem is not within you
But the feeling that you dont belong

And in all your weak, failed attempts
All you seem to create are more tears
Frightening those who would love you
Those yearning to carry you near

With all of your horrid crusading
Against undefeatable foes
You are blind to those who once mattered
And you claim it never did show

When all that surrounds you is broken
When it makes sense to let it all end
Take the time to gaze all around you
And you'll find in the chaos, a friend

I'm sorry I don't have time to explain myself. I wrote a humongous explaination and forgot to log in before I submitted it, so of course now it is deleted and I am very pissed.
Pay close attention to every little detail I changed, including syllables.
I am sorry for exploding at you before, but I truly do hate it when people post in the wrong categories.

Happy Writing

i love this, it was simply beautiful!
Love you allie.
Your Friend forever ; )
xoxo
<3

wonderful poem! it gives me some even a little worthless hope inside me. i really need the hope though...things arent going that good. but gotta think about hope...hope....hope...