Loved the last couplet-5 keep it up=)

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
<3--Shauns Forever--<3

I loved it! Very nice, i hope to become a great writer like you, im new but have got alot of good comments please take a look at my poems sometime if you would like too.
5/5 keep up the good work.

~David~