by *Guerita* Mar 31, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Baby Boo I need you |
by Shy
4/5 |
its a nice poem, but i think the last line doesn't really flow well..maybe trying messin around with it....and try to see what can bring out the end a little more, otherwise, its ok |
by SweetDreamer
I liked it. It's the exact way many people feel about that someone that they love. Nice work! and thanx for the votes/comments on my poems.:) |