Comments : The Flame Within

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Another beautiful poem Heather. You are truly great. hugs, lol, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Oh you're so clever! So is your goal 2 poems a day? lol Not one of your best? I loved it!!! I thought it was great!!! So I read your profile, why didn't you tell me the MAN was on here? I have to go read his poetry now....He better have like 1 billion poems about you!!!! lol Awesome write Heather! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was pretty good.

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    hahaha, thank you so much. I loved it really. i think you did a great job. hahahaha i really liked the ending to lol. it all came together, great job. haha once again thank you so much. Much Luv

    nick

  • 19 years ago

    by Phoenix

    I thought that was fantastic,Peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    you must be doing something right if this poem has a 5.0 rating with 11 votes because if you think this isn't your best, well surprize it's great i love it!!! beautiful! just to tell you i'm going to b on break for a while so i probably won't be on for a week.

    ~lil slam~ take care PLP

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent poem, Heather.
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Heather~
    You have such an amazing way with words...truly unique! Beautifully written as always~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Sammi

    its amazing what you on! Loadsa hidden meanings with alot of hidden passion! You have a lot of hidden talent!