Please write something about this poem, its not that good and i need suggestions on how to make it better.
Thank You, David

beautiful =) really well written. Not as good as your other, but it is still amazing!! <3 so lovely and touching...You're an incredible writer from what I can see and I hope you don't stop writing <3 xxxx

-Mortalidaga
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exquisite, despite your evident self-doubt. Highly enjoyable to find a poet as expressive as yorself, with which I can see similarities beyond verbs and words strung together in managable sentences. I think use of the word "seemingly" is the only thing that kind of looks repetitive, and only to a small point. looks like it was written in a stream of consciousness, a flow of freely written emotions, which I consider some of my personal best pieces of work, so I consider this a depictive and beautiful piece, as long as she who needs to see it actually sees and understands it. great job once again.

Amazing piece!! This IS good!! Thanks for your comment on my poem...I'm sorry to hear what you're going through. Stay strong. If you ever need me don't hesitate to drop an E-mail!! Good luck!!

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thats cute !and wonderful you feel thats way about someone special to u!! 5 excellent!!!

I agree with Tessie!.. How was that in any way shape or form a bad poem... I loved it. You seem like such an amazing guy. I hope you never change. xxx love always xxx