Comments : Immersed In Death

  • 19 years ago

    by Maz

    Huny I know whatyou mean, its always hard to 'truly' express your emotions, but youve dun a really powerfull job here! Please keep writing ok, and stay safe

    xX MAZ Xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    you siad in response to one of my peoms that it was as if i wrote it about you now i have the same feeling i lkoved this poem and i gave it a 5/5 amazing work keep it up your an amazing poet

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    i like this alot and it hits how i usually feel pretty close on the head heres to hoping you feel better

  • 18 years ago

    by anasha

    Mmm.. i could never find the right words to describe how i felt about life.. but then one day, i saw the news and this terrorist, he sat there and he obviously couldn't speak much english but he said something, that's haunted me to this day.. he said .. ' i want death, like you want life' .. it was amazing.. because i can relate.. and its scary when you just sit back and look at what you are thinking from a 'normal' persons point of view.

    anyway, me just rambling on there. that poem was amazing... i'm sure you alot of people can relate to it. I aint gonna bother saying be happy.. lol. cos you in this frame of mind .. but anyway. this is getting long. lol. take care.

    anasha . x