Dying alone in the dark

by codey   Mar 31, 2005


Next time your happy think of this poem,
someone's life is stole.
another father is abusing his daughter,
another person is being slaughtered,
another innocent child starves,
every time some one laughs.
some ones child is being raped,
and left for life or death to be decided by fate,
another child pulls out the knife,
and decides to end their life.
some one is running away from home,
some ones heart is turned to stone.
another person is popping pills at the park,
some one somewhere is dying, crying all alone in the dark

- this is the first poem i have submitted so please vote and comment and i will do the same for yours, i wrote this a while ago when i was feeling really down and i just thought this was an alright poem, not as good as other peoples on this site but i guess it will do, thanks love heaps Codey-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sam

    OMG! I love this poem...it is short but it gets the point across! 5/5 LOVE IT!

  • 19 years ago

    by hiddenimage

    Wow. that actually left a lump in my throat...that is so true tho.good job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elynnka

    It was good, the rhymes were good, but it didn't flow that well... good job overall.
    Keep it up*hugs*

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Maz

    Huny this poem is just as good as anyone else's! Dont underestimate urself ok. This poem has so much depth to it, and it really does show life as people dont like to see it...the TRUTH. Please keep writing and expressing yourself. Take care

    xX MAZ XX