That poem was wonderful, although sad. Take care, and thanks for the comments... |
by Britney
Hey lucy, |
by Megann Lee
Wow great emotion that was captured in your poem. It was really sad. I loved it. |
by Rachel
That was a really emotional poem and I know you have heard it before but if you do ever need to talk or anything then just msg me. You are really talented and show that even though you have been through so much you have pulled through stronger and have a wonderful talent that no one can take away from you. Keep writing and keep smiling |
+.+ I never had that happen to me but, it's hard to open yourself to someone and then they find out and laugh at you, or turn against you, or use it against you. It is an amazingly written poem. Lol. I loVeD the flow. [*5/5*] +.+ |
by Kenz
You've done it again. Its amazing. Its very deep, very personal, I know exactly how you feel. Trust me. Not the same exact situation but close. And I too have found consolation in the things that you have. And I'm not going to pity, because I myself do not want pity. But things get better. This is a wonderful poem. Outlet of emotions at its best. |
Wow really good i know what the whole secret thing is about! brilliant |
by Daz Mellow
OMG!!!! My club bud is a genius! I'm soooo proud of you. lol Great Job! It was sad and tears stung my eyes, but man you're awesome! *high five* hehehe kudos! Good rhythm too. XD |
WOW O.O So full of pain and despair but beautiful in a way =P I hope that this didn't really happen to you, although believe me when I say that I know that the world isn't a nice place =( 5/5 ^.^ and a wonderful poem ^.^ |
by Princess
Wow i realli feel you pain its realli good 5/5 keep up the good work =]] |