I really liked it. you used thorough detail and wonderfully stated symbols whose meaning define the main subject and provide a poetic skill and art to the piece. I really, really admired the line,
"It holds colors of illegal fire"
Beautifully stated.

However, one thing I didn't like was that some of the statements were too blunt,
"The power of men was the walls creator
While that same power was its destroyer."
I thought that was much too bluntly stated and could be revised in a more poetic way.

Overall though i liked it, good job.