HUny that poem is ...wow....Im speechless! Your words are just ... so ...i dont know. You just piant such powerful pictures with your words, such as 'my tounge is stained with lies', its amazing!

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Hey, this is good...i can tell it came frum the heart...that makes the poem the best...keep on writing and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Written with the feeling of true emotion! Good job! Keep posting! Take Care~! Brooke

Hey, this was an awesome poem,good choice of words again! The poem was really strong. You've got talent:P. -C'ya