True Meaning

by Jessica   Mar 31, 2005


Please comment!!!
I don't know if this sucks or not!!!!

Love is a strong sense of feeling,
that fills your heart with desire.
To love is to hold someone special,
with a warmth of blazing fire.
To love is to share life together,
to build special plans just for two.
To love is to smile together,
as all your plans start to come true.
To love is to help encourage,
with smiles and sincere words of praise.
and to take time to show your love,
in tender affectionate ways.
To love is to have someone special,
on who you can always depend.
To love is to share laughter and tears,
as a partner, a lover, a friend.
To love is to make special memories,
of moments you love to recall.
Out of all the things that we may share,
our love is the greatest of all.
To love is to know that your loved,
by someones heart that is true,
I've learned the full meaning of being in love,
by being in love with you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Seductive

    wow that was great!

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    amazing piece of literature, really well written and freely spoken. It is easy to see this was written with the purest of intentionss, within which your soul resides. Love is truth, and the truth will set you free; obviously your soul has been liberated through love. My only advice is in two places where the wording is somewhat awkward for someone like myself, who pays attention to detail. the wording in line two
    "that feels your heart with desire"
    i believe you meant to say "that **fills** your heart with desire"
    also, line 12 needs similar help
    "in tender affection ways"
    once again i believe you were trying to say "in tender **affectionate** ways"
    otherwise, a perfect poem, since nobody has the right to degrade such a magnificent display of splendor. hopefully you take constructive criticism well, and don't think I am putting your work down in any way. thoroughly enjoyable all in all, please continue to speak your mind, it appears to be a beautiful thing. thank you for your comment, and thank you for allowing me the privelage of reading such an awesome poem.

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