This isn't fair!!!

by jello   Apr 1, 2005


It’s just not fair.
Whatever I do people always stare.
Don’t they care that I’m not the only one that took the dare and
wear my hair that certain way that they seem to hate
and to wear those clothes that aren’t as bare as they wear. Sometimes I just can’t bare this, can’t they see that I’m rare.
That I disserve to bare the right to stare at them as well as they can stare. Don’t they care?
Can’t they just take a break and play fair.
Who cares about how perfect their hair is or what they wear?
Can’t they just take the dare?
This isn’t fair!
But obiously they don’t care,
but I do and it’s tearing me up inside
and I can’t help but ask them why don’t you care?
What makes you so special that you don’t have to play fair?

*i was kinda mad when i wrote this and i know this isn't one of my best ones...*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Beautiful x Disaster

    Hey! Not bad. But don't over rhyme with the same ending.. (i.e. rare,wear,dare, stare)..maybe rhyme it once..because what you're doing now is trying to hard to make it rhyme that it doesnt make sense.. and its gets overused..
    just some advice ;-)

    -Christine