Gone

by Fierce   Apr 1, 2005


PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Comment!!!
It would mean so much to me!!!

No matter who I am
No matter who I face
It all seems to be put out of place

Not matter how hard I try
Not matter how many tear I cry
Everything seems to be one big lie

I try my best to keep it strong
It doesn't work, its taking too long

To be the one I need to be
I can't do it, why can't you see

Life is gone, its over, I'm dead
I hung myself, a rope around my head

There is no hope, or love to gain
I can't do this, there's too much pain

I love you all and I'm so so sorry
I hope one day, you won't worry

Today is the end and all is gone
I'm sorry, Mel, I had to leave you alone

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ally xo

    wow i really like this one you have a different style of writing poems i like it.....u r really good 5/5...never give it up..u can go way far in poetry
    Ally

  • 19 years ago

    by R

    Another awsome poem.

    Rose ({*}crystal-tears{*})

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    thanks for the comment (altho I already have my "prince charming"),and a beautiful poem indeed --Keep it up!

    God bless
    Love Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    oh...lol i never knew that. thank you bunches! you are such a sweetheart!

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    hmmm...i guess i could try, theres no harm in that. but how do i enter?