The Fear Inside

by Andrea   Apr 1, 2005


The night whispers its deadly secrets to hear.
Horror and dread comes to those who listen.
Escape is daringly useless to attempt.

Fear has no name in this haunted house.
Every horrible reality speaks for themselves gracefully.
Allure of sweet pain attracts me to the blade.
Raped and striped of all rights that made me a person.

In the corner of my mind, I am trapped in darkness.
Not even a blaze of fire could light the shadows.
Strange how it will never leave but instead broaden.
Initially, no humor is present because of the panic.
Death comes crawling in my thoughts once again.
Everything becomes my living nightmare.

Terribly I am frightened, my body becomes numb.
Eaten morally, my flesh is torn and the blood is bitter.
As soon as the sun sets, all innocence is let go.
Repeatedly my light fades causing me no virtue.
Silent screams as the horror arises the devil inside.

Must run...run until breath is out...hide from him.
Even you can feel his presence as the devil takes over.

All is lost because every night he finds me.
Pain worsens as the bruises and scars appear.
A single tear loosens strength, so I shed none.
Righteousness is of no more; I am condemned.
Traveling out of this fear is harder than I assumed.

-Now read the first letter of each line...what is my poem's message to you?

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  • 19 years ago

    by lindsey

    i like that poem and it says the fear inside tears me apart..That was a good poem..

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    very good write, well done, that was a fantastic read :) keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Fierce

    Your poems was awesome!!! Keep up the good work!!

    Thanks for your comment, it put me to tears. I just got out of the hospital yesterday and I'm feeling so great. I found what I have need for so long, God. I gave my life to Him and I can't believe I did cause He was the one I blamed for my pain. Man I feel like I can conquer the world and I am gonna be the PM for Australia!! There are so many awesome experience I have felt by just accpeting Him into my heart. If you wanna know anything about it just send me an e-mail. My e-mail is slic_chic11@hotmail.com. I swear by Him, there is no way that I would be here right now without Him!! I love you so much *tear* Thank-you so much!!!

    Keep the Faith
    Peace Out

    P.s have you entered any competitions yet?

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    WOAH. i am simply blown away andrea, this poem is such an amazing poem and i think that it is one of the most amazing ones. I have got to add you to my favorites...i don't know if i got you there or not.

    But if you ever want to IM me i have MSN and AIM

    MSN: Lacrossefanforlife at hotmail dot com

    Aim S/N: Dark C Savior

    Five/Five

    P.S. thanks for your comments on my poem. i appreciate them.

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    Amazing poem its a really good write thanks for the comment!

    take care

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