Nice. Can you please tell me why you don't like many poems other than your own? I keep on reading comments you mad eon other peoples poems and they are quite rude. They try to do their best and they are pouring out their emotions but you just laugh at them. Why?

I'm sorry if I sound rude but I'm not sure if you are joking with them or being serious.

excellent poem, i like it!

mm... excellence

I liked the format and the way you put the words across, I also like the question at the end, very effective, keep it up xxx