it started out kind of shaking but it got better as it went on. i don't mean it's a bad poem, i'm giving it a five. it's a really sweet poem, sorry if it's true

~PLP~ Lil slam~

wonderful poem! you have written this so well filled with your personal emotion and feelings, amazing job!

wonderful heartfelt poem...I loved your diction. Very thought provoking with much visonary passion. Sometimes its the hardest thing to write from personal memories more so in sadness but you tackled it beautifully.

When you chance please check out my two latest poems 'Fallen' and 'Secret Love' would be interested in your opinion.

Kind regards
Hayley