Erase

by Daniel Mulvany   Apr 1, 2005


Laying in my room and I am dreaming of your face,
Reoccuring in my thoughts and ever so hard to erase.
So am I wrong to want her if I do not her pursue?
Not that it's me, but just the same, would it be wrong if it were you?
If current bonds are only titles that are breakable indeed,
Be it with time or situation, which'er first is to impede,
Am I so corrupt a man to pursue her now as a friend,
Thinking possibly new beginning means a favorable end?
Or is it only natural for me to be here in this place,
Where time nor situation help and I can't, her face, erase?

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    I liked it, Origonal subject matter.. good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    The silibant sounds of 'place' 'erase' 'face' etc. all work really well here and I love the dialect that you sometime use in your poetry gives it more of a personal feel. Seemed more like a love poem to me....but still very well scribed..

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Wondering why you say your then her....

    The words were good, though, and I like how some of it seemed to be things you don't really hear to much about like the words. It's different but that one line you might want to take a look at unles you were thinking about the your in your mind to yorself in which case I think it would be her.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kalika

    Beautiful.

    Puzzled slightly; is the person you are refering to in the first line, one in the same with the person to whom you are refering in the last?

    If so, why did you change the reference from "Your" to "Her"?

    Kalika

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