Comments : Lies...

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    ... Its been a long while since I last wrote anything... this poem seems kind of random but it is what Im going through right now. Its a strange feeling to go through something like this :S

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    ooh, i really like this. very good write and i hope things will get better for you!

  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    Hey you! its great to have you back. I can tell this poem was just a starter piece to get you back into writing. its perhaps not as expressive as your others, takes on a slightly different style but ino where you're coming from. Looking forward to reading more work from you. As soon as I saw ur post under my weed topic, I knew Allen was back and there'd b a pom waiting 4 me to read.

    luv, liss

  • 19 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's kinda funny! But well written! If you get a chance plz check my poems too. Cheers!