Comments : Misplaced Words

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful Heather, and I was blessed with 4 of them all younger than me. I know you cherish her. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    AAAawwwwwwwww Heather!! That was so sweet!!! Did you give it to her? Well if you didn't you SHOULD!! I love it!! I hate my sister....she's such a fruit...That's why I'm so glad I got Carrie because the other one...woooo, let's not go there....lol Ok I'm rambling.....Beautiful poem!! 5/5 :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    hey great poem, i know what this is like i have a lil bro and well it's just a year and a half but he's smarter then me, hes a 4.0 student. it's kind of hard to deal with sometimes, least i can say i'm better in english then him!! keep up the great writing!! f.y.i. all those poems i wrote last night was cause a lot of stress was gone, it was really cool lol. thanks for you wonderful and beautiful comments:)

    PLP ~lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    wow heather, very well done, and a sweet dedication~
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    wow, great poem, it reminded me of my relationship with my sister, you're an amazing poet... 5/5 Take Care
    Alwayz, Danielle

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    awww, this is beautiful and touching. very sweet poem, i love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    beautiful heather, and so sweet.......keep it up, i love getting on the site everyday and reading your new poems.....take care ~much love~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

    ps could you let me know how i did on my new poem "Temptation of the knife"......it would mean a lot, i really value your opinion

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Hey Heather~
    This is such a lovely poem! Very heartfelt...I love this line!

    "Each day, I watch you grow
    and fade the title of little girl,"

    So uniquely written...keep it up~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Child of God

    AWE!! I want a wittle sister! very sweet heather! and keep writting i havnt been on for a while so i need to catch up and read some more of ur latest poems!! nice job 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    that's so sweet. u r both lucky to have each other.
    Sammi morris