Really nice job as usual. Usually when rhyme scheme's choppy the poem isn't that great, but with your vocabulary and beautiful imagery, this poem was awesome. Great job!

brilliant.
yeah i can't be all detailed like the other people, i just know i loved it and its truly beautiful writing.

gosh, that was sad. it didnt rhyme too well, but it was still good.
p.s- please rate mine

wow very powerful message! take care
xxxLoUxxx

okk this is for everyone/..poems don't NEED to rhyme...

poem is really interesting ...open to interpreation i think every1 will have a different idea of this 1 ....i dont know myself what the true meaning behind the poem......got me thinking for a abit....

great poem! 5/5

This defiantly got me thinking but i loved it and i thought it flowed fairly well and i agree it doesn't have to rhyme to be great and this is a perfect example of that... Loved it!!!

wow this is a profound write i could easily imagine it as wrritten by a master of the art

Definitely should be a solid 5, but some people don't understand this level of poetry and it just goes over their head, then under their feet. Literally.

I commend you for your excellent work. I loved the symbolism and imagry in this piece, as well as your diction. Wonderful job.

good poem...pretty powerful. I love the rhyming scheme. 4/5

Confusing, but great. I didn't quite understand it, but yet, I liked it.......

well done hun really deep poem xxxx

That was a very powerful poem, well done, it worked for me and I loved it, keep it up

i agree with aj..nice poem.

Ok I am completely lost the start was good and was good to follow and then somewhere you just hucked it all in the toilet. What were you trying to say here

lol okk this poem is about those people who are ready to leave behind their own perspective of life to achieve material success but in the end there is nothing left of their own selves and what they gain or lose means nothing as they are pretending to be something they are not
the last stanza is the fact that although who are others who might not agree with such a route to success neither of these two types of people know which view is correct although they know that their perspectives are so different only one should be allowed to exist bt since they can't tell which for the moment we all need to coexist.....now do you all get it??(crossing my fingers lol)

Interesting and unique in format.
-Kate

I agree a poem does not have to rhyme! I was a little lost in the poem! But once I read what u wrote about the meaning I was on the right track! Very unique! Very well done! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke

I just posted a new one Set Free would love ur opinion! Thanx!

This Is So Freaking good...Great work...Ahhhh....I love your style....
Xox Sherrie