I know how you feel. Thanks for the thought.

David this is one of your best.

wow very powerful message and put so nicly with the last line! well done cant think of anything wrong with the poem! take care and if u have the time check out some of my work please!?
xxxLoUxxx

Love the title and the ending. In the second line, however, it should be "hear" instead of "here".

I already commented and voted...But I'll say again that I really like this poem.

(I'm Likuid Pain)

:)

Great job, nice thoughts and rhyme.

great poem, I wish I could see things that way more, really got me thinking...keep it up
~Christina

awesome poem. I loved this one. You're really talented. and thank
you very much for commenting on
my poems. take care, Marjan