Hey man, good poem I liked it. But u don't mean that do u? If poets in here don't like ur work, shrug it off and keep on going, don't let them get to you. U did express ur feelings, but keep up the great work and just keep writing. Don't worry about what other people think, be urself. Peaze I gave u a 5/5

Cool poem, good read. I think your writing is raw and on the edge...I have checked out some of your other stuff, I like your style. I agree with Kika, shrug it off.

You should read some of my earlier stuff, I write what I feel fanstasy mostly but always on the edge...If we cannot express ourselves through our words then how else can we, poerty like art is how other poeple percieve it to be...But its always safe, it is at the end of the day words!!!

Keep up the good work...Check out my latest piece 'secret love' and when you have time check out some of my earlier stuff I would be interested in your opinion.

Kind regards
Hayley

Were people actually dissing your poems? That's really messed up... I thought it was great... The only thing you need to make a good poem is heartfelt emotion. As long as it comes from you, it's wonderful. Good luck with Eve Angel!

that was a good poem..

Gahahahah babe this is a very angry poem!!! I liked it though, because you're standing up for yourself. and that shows strength especially through what you wrote. Dont listen to anyone else okay? If you enjoy writing, if you enjoy poetry, then dont let ANYTHING stand in your way.
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Every1 has der own style of writin i don't thynk any1 has da rite 2 say shyt abot any1 elses poetry. 5/5!