Comments : I'm afraid of losing you

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    great last line, a lot of people feel like this if they lose someone that is special to them that they would be so hurt, sad, and depressed. i have writen about two poems like this. i know this feeling. excellently writen, good emotion.

    5/5 ~plp~ Lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    very good, emotionally written well done once again