good job. very expressive. I like how it tied in to the March to the Battle. 4/5.

heyy i luved dis and the idea about having this part 2 very impressive stuff:)

I definatly liked the first one better. It says alot more i think. This part, I'm not sure what's the main point to it. It gets a little bit confusing to me. Not one of your best.. keep up the work tho.