by pinkalias Apr 1, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
What would it take to proclaim a lost source of heroic deeds to once again betroth his care to a helpless soul? |
by Ian Robert
What a lovely peice.. The great qualitys of your always improving orginal work and alittle bit of of angelic purity.. Loved it 5/5 |
by katie!
Well done, that was really elegantly and well put piece of writing, The flow of the poem was enjoyable and I enjoyed the meaning I put to it, I don't normally like long poems because generally they lose interest but this poem captivated me right up till the end, keep writing and take care |
I got the feeling I was reading shakespeare |
by pinkalias
Thanks for the book titles JH, I'll be sure to look at those and tell you what I think. |
by Eden
I really like this poem. It means a lot for life not just for me, but I'm sure it means a lot to the rest of the people that read it too. Great piece. Maybe you could stop by my poems sometime and read some of mine. They're not as great as some of yours that I have read, but I'd like to get comments and stuff to see how I can upgrade my skills :) And once again, great poem:):) |