by Maz
Really relate to this one huny, great job, its very 'true'. Take care yea |
by Brookeღ
I know the feeling about the feelings hidden inside. Great emotion! I have one "In These Eyes" I don't know if u have ever read it but it's along the same lines! Take Care! Brooke |
by *liZ*
Its short and powerful I like ones like these |
by hussain
i can relate to this one its hort put straight to the point. i like it. take care |
by **Just Her**
awsome ending!!! really good, its my fave outta the poems of urs ive read. im pretty much speechless, it just stirs a lot of emotions! good job!!! |
by shannon
i can really relate to it.. i love it |
by Dorotea©
Bravo. I liked it. The last lines were, once again, good. You have talent at not hurrying the poems especially in the end and that's great! I really liked this one. Keep on writing, |