Hey, look i am stood right here

by Alex   Apr 1, 2005


Hey, look i am stood right here
Trying to speak loud and clear

I see you laughing in a crowd
I try to join in and speak up loud

But when I speak no-one cares
I may as well be thin air

I hate it when I see you look over in my direction
I hate the fact you notice me but don't pay me any attention

Hey, look I am stood right here
Trying to scream loud and clear

Now will you look and notice me
standing there crying tears.

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  • 19 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    interesting... sad tho... a lot of emotion put into the words. good job i enjoyed this
    stay strong and take care always

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy-Rae

    Not really my style, but it was alright. Could use a few more lines to make it flow better. Stay strong.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah-Louise

    I think this was a good poem, until the last two lines. no offence hun, but when the whole of the rest of the poem rhymes and the last two lines don't...it just doesn't particularly sound right! Get the last two lines to rhyme like the rest and you'll have yourself a great poem! x

  • 19 years ago

    by *liZ*

    wow, thats really sad.. I think we all feel that way in our a life at one time or another
    very well written adn thanks for your comments.
    you are very sweet
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    very good poem, well done

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