Thats a really good poem! keep it up! 5/5 Plz check out my poemz! luv christina

Amazing poem so unique! I love it! Very well written! Take Care! Brooke

DAng your awsome i wish i had that talant

this was such a sad depressing poem, i really felt the emotion in this, i dont just read your words, i really feel them. I loved every word.
<3always,
cate

this was such a sad depressing poem, i really felt the emotion in this, i dont just read your words, i really feel them. I loved every word.
<3always,
cate

Another great poem. It was so sad and it had alot of emotion in it. Your a very talented writer. xX

I loved the imagery in this poem. It was very well thought out and it gave the poem life. I do feel that some of the rhyming was forced, however its content drowns it out. Nice job. 5/5.

~rolo

oh wow......thats exactly what i said when i finished this poem. it was so...idk real...i understand exactly what emotions go into this poem, because i've felt the same way. I think i'm going to add u to my favorites. i love the way u write....

there were so many lines in this poem, too many to put, that were my favorite. i feel connected to this poem expecially, becuase i've always felt this way.

wow very well written i enjoyed it...great job...keep it up...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though But this poem was awesome! 5/5!

Great job!!!

Ps:plz check out my poems and plz make me one of ur favorites ive allready got u

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Micky

I really like this one. 5/5

Mallori