by Maz
WOW! i like thsi huny, i really do, it shows how far things can go. I really like the way that you say abouty teh pain, insted of sayin its 'numb' like alot of people do, when I know for myself that ist not. Really good write, take care |
you scare me cara, you really do...it hurts to see you write poems with so much pain...how can i take it away???...i want to so badly and yet everytime I try to help you I don't know if I am or not...this poem you wrote made me cry...it scared me...for goodness sakes, my heart about stopped!...plz, i know you think about hurting yourself but plz don't...if you hurt yourself you will be hurting so many other people then just you!...you are my best friend and i love you with all my heart and i don't think i could ever handle losing you...plz hold on for at least me!...lov ya always, your bestest best friend, jen |
by Cara
Wow, that poem was awfully sad. It's quite scary how far things can go. I liked it very much. It scared me, but sometimes those are the best poems. When reality slaps you in the face. |