by *Guerita*
very nice jov but where it says "you will see from me" i reallt think it should be hear instead of see but idk that is just me .. besudes that really nice poem .. i hop0e you read one of mine |
by Brookeღ
It's hard to let go I know that sometimes it's for the best. Very well written! Nice work. Take Care! Brooke |
by Selfrejected
nice poem i've had that said to me...just not worded as nicely...damn it you need to break up with me...got a 5/5 from me |
by Amit
Excellent write, Jena. Very well expressed! |
by Reddo Tori
Very good...there's so much emotion in your words, it's lovely ^^ |
by xxamberxx
hi |
by xxamberxx
lol i cant stop reading this poem it's real good, but maybe that's because i over look things because i feel like this my bf used to do drugs and drink alot he's only 15 but he stopped when we started goin out but he goes all funny n weird with me wen we have argument but thats partly his mum n dads fault cos his mums an alcoholic and dads a depressive ( nice huh? ) lol any way great poem reeeeeeallyy got alot of meaning!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
a poem from the heart with a nice flow |
by Maddie
very nicely written but the last few verses don't seem to flow very well.. |
by Carmen
i think it was sweet. 5/5 my cousin thinks its cool too |
by mysterious
this is a fantastic poem...i used to feel that way before about someone i loved, but i ended up hhurting myself in the end....i hope you have better luck than i did.....5 |
by Luis Raymond
finally u are gonna move on! |
by Luis Raymond
finally u are gonna move on! |