From Chaos Good Will Spring (revised and co-written by Nobody)

by EpithetPoet   Apr 2, 2005


When the world is failing to flourish
Ask yourself what you would do?
While constant thoughts leak to your mind
Would the world improve without you?

Or is it that you are just thinking
With all that's around you gone wrong
That the problem is not within you
But the feeling that you dont belong

And in all your weak, failed attempts
All you seem to create are more tears
Frightening those who would love you
Those yearning to carry you near

With all of your horrid crusading
Against undefeatable foes
You are blind to those who once mattered
And you claim it never did show

When all that surrounds you is broken
When it makes sense to let it all end
Take the time to gaze all around you
And you'll find in the chaos, a friend

*This poem was looked at and revised by my friend Nobody. I thank him very much for his help :)*

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  • 19 years ago

    by NeXTz

    ^^

  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    awsome job! as always
    peace.
    Love
    Always
    [[samz]]

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Well it was 50/50. Figured you should get at least 50% of the credit.
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    You didn't have to give me any credit for this. I simply revised it. You were the one that did all the dirty work.

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Amazing hun. What a great poem - the message is so true. A friend lays around every dark and daunting corner.

    Well done <3
    Luffuuls Yew -

    Kalah.