.... wow:) oh man thats all there is to say. just one hint of advice. dont apologize for your work being "too long" when it comes from the heart and soul, there is no limit, the only part that sucked is ... that your poem ended:)
keep writing and in touch
much love
jay

Wow gr8 write, srry it took so long for me to check it out, but i really enjoyed this def a 5