thanks everyone

thanks everyone

thanks everyone

Hi Lucy :D
I havent talked to you for a while. In fact I havent spoken to another meatball hoagie in AGES. No one seems to go in the forums anymore. Its all 'the wolf pack' and 'the bashers' now, I have no one to talk to lol.
Anywayz I really like this poem. Its reall emotional. I know how you feel.

Take care and talk to ya soon,
Rachelxx

This is the right lucy yeah....? Cause man that would be embarrasing if it wasnt.

Thats an amazing poem, flowed so well, can just feel your pain through it. So powerful.
Keep it up.. 5/5

kt x

aww hope your ok good poem 5/5
thanks for the comment

another great one, very impressed again. 5/5

i thought the poem was very good despite it being rambled thoughts as you stated. I hope you don't always hate yourself for inside you have a beautiful talent. :) take care.

Excellent poem, keep it up and take care.

wow there is alot of comments :-) but im sure you are beautiful and you dont need to cutting yourself to make yourself feel better....im sure all the blood you end up losing wont change the way you feel but if you have any questins my e-mail is lilcory6280@hotmai.com

Hey lucy.. wow that was really deep. That poem was great, you shouldnt doubt your poetry because its great!

great job! i luv the ending thats how i feel keep up the good work

omg great work really loved it.. well done mwahz!! ur so talenteed.. please check out my newest poem "help me" n tell me wat u fink stephy :):)

wow your an amazing poet...keepup the grate work love s0ph

*huggles* Aw, hun, we love you enough for you!!!
~Kit

This is a very good poem. Reveals the sad truth. I used to hate myself. Now I mostly just hate hate. heh. I'm glad you could vent this way. I hope you're not cutting or slashing yourself still. If you ever want to talk, PM or IM me.

Take care. Thanks for the comment, hon.

xxx

I have to disagree with you saying this poem wasn't good. I happend to love it. It was well written keep up the good work.

First of all thank you for entering my contest and second this poem is beautiful personally some poems shouldnt criticized as they are how people feel and by changing them for someone else means someone elses feeling being put it this is a very good poem keep it up :):):)

would you look at some of my stuff please thnx xxx alex xxx

Heyyy! thanks for the comments on my poems. I'm not sick of them no worries. I thought this was an absolutely wonderful poem. Its the truth inside and out. Its emotional. Its believable. And its a good outlet. I'm sure thats a big reason for writing. But keep it up. This is the first one I've read. Expect more comments from me naturally.