by rachel
wow fantastic poem, ur full of talent keep writin and stay strong xxx 5/5 |
by fallen angel
i love this poem. its got emotion in it. i love to see true emotion in a poem, and you did it, well done xx |
by kiesha
That was wonderfully done. I can totally identify with your poem. I write in my diary all the time, it helps me get a lot of my feelings out. Keep writing! |
by Kayla
the rhyming pattern is a bit off in places...and personally i think dear diary is written too many times....and when i read a poem i dont like to expect what is going to happen....but thats me....4/5 nice idea though...luv yas mwah |
by Lu
Your emotion was so clear .Words just seemed to fall into place. I can almost feel your sadness . Great piece of work ! |
by Natalie
Hey..Even though you don't like what my msn addy is.. I rekon this peom is really good ..I really like the ending part! :) |
by VioletRaven
This is a touching well written poem, I'm so glad I read this. I found the repetition and rhyming to be really effective, and the emotion well expressed. |
by xxMagioxx
Awesome poem, I love it a lot, though I don't have a diary, I can see myself in your poem. |
by Darien
Strange coming on to find a poem, with the same title, and almost the same idea. That's great! I give you ownership because you were the first. Although, both our poems have different identities, but great job thinking of the idea, you beat me to it. |
by aDORKable x3
Wow what a poem! loved it! |