by Sinister Soire Apr 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
This mirror is my life |
by nikki
wow, i loved this poem so much! and i feel like thats all my comments to people on here ever say, but its so true, i really really loved this. it was beautiful and just, wow. <3 |
by katie!
wow logan that was so brilliant, keep it up |
Good poem! At the beginning though it flowed a certain rhyme pattern and then near the middle it changed again which really messed up the flow.... I think you could maybe work on that and then for this verse i have a suggestion |
by No Motiv?
i really like this poem....it portrays defense mechanisms and the nature of people's tendencies perfectly....job well done. |
Wicked. This was extremely cool and one of your best. |