very deep and great!keep up the good work

Nice.

What a deep and emotional poem, I started to cry, so sad!!! Hope that you are ok???? Well done girl, this poem is really amazing, love reading your poems, you have talent!!

Love Sabrina

Hey Gurl... Its me Mya... I don't kno wut to say. You are such an amazing writer. I hope to become the writer you are one day. Just to have your talent would mean a lot to me. Well done. 5/5. Stay strong. I kno it is easier said that done. Believe me. Keep up the wonderful work!

Love Bunchez
~*EmO*~ (AKA Mya)

It took me a moment to understand what the last stanza was saying. Very interesting how you approached this, i got from it that someone, or even yourself, is grabbing your hand so you refrain from cutting any deeper. I bet at least 5 people are grabbing your hand just from this site alone.
Much love and great poem.
Your friend,
-A

Aww! so sad..I loved it though..It's a good one!

Chris

I totally get it, nice work hun! I love the ending, it kinda twists....perfect! 5

Love ya
Heather

Amazing poem ... wow