Comments : The room

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Creepy, i like it!
    xxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    ohhh katie!, that is so sad, im always here for you ok, im at blue_kittykat_@hotmail.com ok, but another brilliant poem, you just type and instantly know what to type, its all from your hearT, your heart that deserves bettter, for deep inside is where it matters most, and katie, don't worry
    one day, you will have the last laugh, but not before you hang yourself, when you are announced, prom queen,!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    AMAZINGLY written, so may perfect words!!! I love it, believe in your talent and belive in yourself!!! I care for you...Don't you forget!!!

    Love Sabrina

  • 19 years ago

    by hussain

    Am kinda speechless too..such a deep poem.......one that i hope is fictionalised.

    take care katie!

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    wow... that one was kinda scary, but it was a good poem! i gave it a 5... great job!
    p.s- please rate my poem 'Valentines Day'

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    Wow, it really gives a in depth description of what goes through your mind when you feel so down. It kept my attention.:). Nice work! and thx for the comments on mine.

  • 19 years ago

    by cac123

    so deeply beautifull. i just absolutley loved this poem. I love love loved this one. Omg im so in love with it haha you are an amazing writer!!
    5/5
    much love,
    Cate

  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    this is reli amazin, scary bt reli beautiful and movin 1 of my fave poems of urs so far. keep writin ur mre than appreciated

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey was very good poem from you. Very scary indeed! Keep it up! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by erotema

    well done. i really enjoyed reading your poetry. it is very easy to read, and you create such vivid images. keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by otto

    5/5 that wa a really really really good poem, i liked everything about it, ur an amazeing writting keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Nici

    Again I feel an equal balance of reality and fantasy, with the descriptive language taht you used in this poem. Well written.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

  • 19 years ago

    by shakenangel

    ur darker poems are really really good. "my swelling insanity", that is just so powerful. it blew me away.
    5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    Scary but great...5/5!